SNARES UNSHACKLED | POEM | Tribute to Rwanda
I watched as a gray streaking hare
hopped and leaped into the air with a flair
only to land smack right in the middle of a snare
blinded by the the intense glare of a blinding flare
was the hare in a scare that was rare?
wiggling this way and that way but going no where
it lay quiet and still with its belly laid bare
a hunter stopped to stare
at this forlon creature so tight and gasping for air
bending down he cut the jaws that made a pair
freeing the hare from the steel grip of terror
I looked closely to see what kind of fella
would offer a hand as an umbrella
to a creature that by all accounts fair and square
should have ended up in the back of his trailer
Hutu or Tutsi? Rwandise, was the gentle counter
When I ventured to ask if it was an error
I am neither one nor the other
He pointed to his gray hair and then to the freed hare
My eyes quickly adjusted in a bid to compare
and In an instant, I saw the damage and the repair
and a tear rolled down as it washed away my dispair
For there before me stood two echos with time to spare
reverberating with a message so simple and lacking in flair
the swift kicks of a free wheeling hare
and yet as timeless and winding as the white strands of hair
of a kind and loving hunter fella
that I met in the back of a rusty and dusty trailer
By Solomon W. Jagwe | Soreel GraFX © All RIghts Reserved | http://www.sowl.com
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Sol,
From a poetry standpoint, this is amazing work! The rhyme scheme is pretty impressive; the diction very emotive. I am more than impressed and look forward to seeing more of these.
And it feels like the souls of all those Rwandese that were killed are suddenly freed by the hunter from the snare and now roam as happily as rabbits in this world and the next – these 15 years later.
Like I said, excellent work, my friend. Excellent work!