From a poetry standpoint, this is amazing work! The rhyme scheme is pretty impressive; the diction very emotive. I am more than impressed and look forward to seeing more of these.

And it feels like the souls of all those Rwandese that were killed are suddenly freed by the hunter from the snare and now roam as happily as rabbits in this world and the next – these 15 years later.

Like I said, excellent work, my friend. Excellent work!